rare and new reveiws
August 26, 2003 � 6:35 p.m.
Second Entry Today
Okay, so this isn't really an entry, but a documentation of the fantabulous reviews I got from Jessica at New Review and Nafia at Rare Silk Diaries. They both gave me high scores and cool ass comments.
Thank you so much guys for taking the time to review me. You rock!!
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Rare Silk:
dalyrical1
Stoli Soaked Sestinas
CONTEXT: 38/45 First entry was a total explanation. I think i liked it, mainly because you put it all in your own words. Readers, i believe, want to read your diary because of how interesting your life seems. (Or at least, i think so.)
EXPRESSION/PERSONALITY: 25/25 Quite amusingly, you speak the truth here. Being brutually honest is another good quality of your writing.
EXTRAS: 10/10 You can do so much with her extras, i tell you.
CONTACT: 10/10 Tagoboard, Notes, Guestbook, etc.
LINKS: 10/10 A button on the main page
TOTAL SCORE: 93/100
COMMENTS: Enjoy the Emerald Ring. Peace.
Score: 93/100
Reviewed on 2003-08-26 at 2:19 p.m. by Nafia
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New-Review:
dalyrical1
August 26, 2003, 1:39 pm
Template: 21/25 --- oh oh oh pretty picture, lovely font in the lyrics. the black matches, as does the font. the only thing i dont like is the date that follows me everywhere!! i hate those things. trust me, regular pointers are better. hah, i LOVE the popup when you enter the page. i giggled. i suggest that you make a couple seperate pages, just to get rid of clutter. the archieve page would look better with a smaller font. otherwise though, i liked your layout, its pretty.
Content: 35/35 --- "i put on make up and got dressed up for the first time since we broke up. I had the Egyptian eyes, the sparkly hair gel, the Pleasures perfume...the cleavage was out, the legs shiny through the slit on my skirt...for the first time in a long time...I felt attractive... sexy... alive... and when a guy was looking at me that I thought was cute... I was actually able to flirt without feeling guilty about it. I finally didn't feel like I was betraying you." i loved this entry. you are a very articulate person. you can express yourself wonderfully. love it. "Ignorance is truly bliss." its true. i never quote people in their reviews, but i want to quote everything you say. simply gorgeous.
Contact: 5/5 --- guestbook, tag, notifylist, notes, email.
Style: 5/5 --- long entries. but all good. rock.
Html: 5/5 --- i can tell youve added alot of stuff to your diary as you learn more html. im telling you, i cant get over it. "what would jesus not do?" hah, i love it. i cant link anymore entries, because there are too many. the cowboy conversations are awesome.
Accessible: 4/5 --- its cluttered, but everything is pretty easy to find. i think that you should mkaes a seperate page for your reviews, and maybe for your contact. it would look prettier. it took me a while to find the basic links.
Extras: 6/5 --- weather, counter, copyright thing, diarist registry, that clock thing on the mouse, guestmap, bday thing. daily reads, clix, poll, imood. whoa girlie. make a seperate extras page.
Linked: 5/5 --- yup yup.
Profile: 5/5 --- everything is filled out well. you seem to have a sick sense of humour, and i love that.
Overall: 3/5 --- it would be a four, but the clutter bothered me a little. ill be back though. loved the writing.
Subtotal: 94/100
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Total: 94/100.
reviewed by jessica
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Ok....that was really childish...I know...but fuck it...people like me....THEY REALLY LIKE ME!!!
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